Wednesday, 29 April 2009

Haiku

You laughed, so tickled;
High summer, beach, sandcastles,
And me in my scarf.


It's a cold sunshine,
These days without you; you know
That the nights are worse


Departure clock ticks.
My watch was set fast, and I,
I wish you away


Holding my breath in,
I was desperate to know
What your answer was.

4 comments:

Sarah Monteith said...

Beautiful. You have a real talent for haiku, Nathan. Very poignant. x

zero_zero_one said...

Thanks Sarah! Am going to try one of those Richter poems you were talking about last night, I wrote down the format :)

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed these. Good work

=)


-Matt

zero_zero_one said...

Cheers Matt!